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07-03-2011, 12:33 AM
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Could I get your opinion on this?
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07-03-2011, 12:46 AM
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I REALLY like the intro, it's rather amusing. ;P
I LOVE ALL of the music choices man, but there's one thing that sticks out that turns me off. THE MUSIC TRANSITION. You HAVE to have something in between the changing of a song to make it appealing with the gameplay. This is ESSENTIAL! Rather than just fading out, end the song with a BANG and introduce the next song louder than the last song. (Example: At 1:54, when the C4 exploded, you could have inserted a C4 exploding sound clip and put slow-mo on the video clip and a visual effect at the explosion, then played the next song. This would have been more appealing.)
I like the colors man, but having the same color throughout the same long video can get boring pretty fast. There needs to be some visual effects variety, otherwise your eyes will get adjusted to that color and you won't be appealed to it for more than a minute.
You need to balance the audio, it's never a good idea to have the music 2x louder than the gameplay! In some scenes, I felt like I was watching a music video since I couldn't even hear the gun shots!
VIDEO. TRANSITIONS. This is also essential for a successful video! I didn't see a single video transition in any clip man, thats a no-no. Without transitions, the viewer struggles to figure out in some situations whether it's a new scene or the same scene. It's also extremely visually appealing!
I think the last clip could have been much better if it was shot in 1st person rather than free cam, just my opinion!
All in all, GREAT video! I give it 4/5 stars!
You're kills were magnificient, your music was great, it just needed some better transitions and visual editing.
Last edited by I No Scoped JFK; 07-03-2011 at 01:01 AM.
Reason: I'm a trained video critic.
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07-03-2011, 01:15 AM
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yea....what he said, nice video i liked it all but the music transition kinda threw me off a little bit
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07-03-2011, 01:36 AM
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Thanks for the feedback. I need good criticism. I am new to Vegas and this is only the third montage Ive ever done so Im learning. Also, some of those clips had made appearances in other montages, but the guy I was making it for wanted them in and didnt have the originals. So, I had to mute them so you wouldnt hear another song playing lol Thanks for the feedback though. I will keep what was said in mind when I go to make another one.
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07-03-2011, 01:44 AM
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Thanks for the feedback. I need good criticism. I am new to Vegas and this is only the third montage Ive ever done so Im learning. Also, some of those clips had made appearances in other montages, but the guy I was making it for wanted them in and didnt have the originals. So, I had to mute them so you wouldnt hear another song playing lol Thanks for the feedback though. I will keep what was said in mind when I go to make another one. 
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The pleasure is all mine man! And by the way, if you need some amazing montage songs, send me a PM! I'll hook you up bro.
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07-03-2011, 01:49 AM
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sick dude.
how did u make the intro?
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07-03-2011, 02:35 AM
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I made it from scratch in Sony Vegas Pro 9.
Did any of you guys sub to the channel?
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07-03-2011, 10:15 AM
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I checked it out, pretty nice work tbh..
I'll give ya a sub and a like 
I don't like the whole WEED advertising thing or name.
Must be way full of yourself to have that on there...
If you smoke weed you smoke weed, no need to announce it global to everyone.
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07-03-2011, 11:45 AM
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Originally Posted by America
I checked it out, pretty nice work tbh..
I'll give ya a sub and a like 
I don't like the whole WEED advertising thing or name.
Must be way full of yourself to have that on there...
If you smoke weed you smoke weed, no need to announce it global to everyone.
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Isn't announcing u have a problem with someone illustrating a harmless interest just as audacious as that person illustrating that interest.
Nothing wrong with weed, if someone showed a the Marlboro insignia I doubt anyone would say anything about it.
The only reason why weed is illegal is because they can't patent it i.e. The government can't nickel and dime u for it cuz I can grow it in my backyard.
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07-03-2011, 03:26 PM
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Originally Posted by America
I checked it out, pretty nice work tbh..
I'll give ya a sub and a like 
I don't like the whole WEED advertising thing or name.
Must be way full of yourself to have that on there...
If you smoke weed you smoke weed, no need to announce it global to everyone.
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Honestly, I wasnt trying to promote it at all. The guy in the montage, his tag is THEWEEDBOY, so I made him an intro lol Never thought anyone would take it as a negative thing. Myself, I tried weed back in school and wasnt a fan.
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